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Conscious and Verbal: Poems 1996-2000
signals a change in the verses
of poet Les Murray. While traces of the man known for his rugged, political
poems can still be found, his new work is quieter, more pensive and sometimes
tender. This change in attitude resonates with Murray’s survival, in 1996, of
a three-week-long coma. These poems retain and reflect the silent wonder of an
intensive care ward, while the phrase “conscious and verbal” is taken from a
newspaper article, which used the words to describe Murray during his recovery.
Murray
began his career writing poems about the experience of the poor, the rural, and
the marginalized of contemporary Australia. His first book of poems, The Ilex
Tree, was published in 1965, and he has remained relatively prolific ever
since, winning international acclaim by the early 1990s and becoming
Australia’s most famous poet. Conscious and Verbal offers a more
finely grained world in which our presence is only contingent and in which we
must discover our own place.
Born
in New South Wales, Australia in 1938, Murray spent his childhood and
adolescence working on a dairy farm. Early in life, he developed an acute eye
for injustice and an impatience for the verbose, flowery language often employed
to mask it. Murray began to write in his own style, a style that is as
thematically and linguistically irreverent as it is formally flawless. For
Murray, a poem is an exercise in balance between the impolite and the impeccably
trained, a tension that has long characterized his work.
Conscious
and Verbal shows a new attention to the process
of poetic creation, mirrored in his description of construction in rural
Australia in “The Water Plough”:
…Building with the country,
not on it. Building and reshaping it,
cuttings and bywashes and ramps,
finding the walls it would agree to,
stopping the chainsaws of erosion-water,
arresting them to spoons of sky light…
Like
the anonymous builders of “The Water Plough,” Murray knows how to make his
pieces work not in spite of their quotidian language, but because of it. He
painstakingly creates his poems out of the everyday materials of speech,
remnants left behind or overlooked by other poets. While Murray has always used
prosaic words, one surprise in this new volume is that they are applied
differently now, in more obtuse metaphors.
In Conscious
and Verbal, Murray’s language not only indicates the often-neglected
aspects of our daily life; it also celebrates the ambiguities that flourish in
these gaps in our attention. Whereas before Murray’s comparisons were more
often made with a nod to the dynamic, tangible life of the poet, as if to keep
the poem anchored in the physical present, Murray now seems more concerned with
linking his poems to something far more indistinct and perhaps sublime.
In a
poem called “Sound Bites,” Murray explores a verbal space that is not
constructed out of linear progressions of meaning, but is suggested by
language’s ambiguity and implication. The poem gestures toward something
greater in which all of that consciousness is contained. Murray writes,
“it’s a body-prayer, a shower: you’re/ in touch all over, renewing,
enfolded in a wing—“ and later, “but I bask in the pink that you’re in
(Repeat).” “Sound Bites” relates to the reader in an entirely new manner
than Murray’s past poems, forcing the readers to accept kinship with something
that is perhaps subconscious and accessible to them only outside of individual,
conscious experience.
Still,
the physical world remains important to Murray in Conscious and Verbal.
It is a literal landscape to be inhabited and appropriated, not distantly
praised or clinically assessed. Whether he dives into a pond of “eel
jelly…thick as beef, smelling aluminum,” in “The Water Plough,” or
watches people begin to “breathe watercolors” of light in “The Mowed
Hollow,” Murray’s relationship to the elements is dynamic. Indeed, what is
most affecting in Murray’s poems is his success at denying what other poets
have so long embraced as their raison d’être: the poet’s own alienation
from the world.
This
engaged, exuberant life in his poems has long been one of Murray’s
characteristic strengths; we get the sense that he not so much writes these
scenes as transcribes them from a tangible and complete sensory experience of
his own. Whereas other poets observe and then translate their experience into
poetically appropriate language, Murray abandons propriety with his startling
immediacy. His poems stay closer to his initial impulses and inspirations. His
language expresses exactly what the world is, not what it is like, for similes
involve a certain degree of separation from the actual experience.
Murray’s
use of the prosaic, then, is fundamental to his poetic purpose. He is a
poet-rebel against the convolutions of verbiage that hold the reader apart from
the experience of the poem. Like the arctic bear of “The Ice Indigene,”
Murray “can be simple anywhere he is going.” He has discovered, again and
again, the power of recognition and the engagement it creates in poems, so often
alienated from, and alienating to, the reader. In the final part of “You Find
You Can Leave It All Behind,” a poem more explicitly about his time in a coma
than the others, Murray enters our minds:
God, at the end of prose,
somehow be our poem—
When forebrainy consciousness goes
wordless selves it'd barely met,
inertias if rhythm, the life habit
continue to battle for you.
Murray’s
poems of renaissance in Conscious and Verbal (as in the rest of his
oeuvre) assure us that wonder abides everywhere, that the space poems inhabit is
not only in the leather-bound kingdom of Beinecke, but also in the unmapped
regions of our most mundane moments. Murray offers us the possibility that
poetry is as miraculous and varied as beauty itself, a beauty he is able to find
in the most unexpected places. Indeed, perhaps the greatest beauty revealed by
his work is the potential for new understanding of our unexamined
experience, the unconscious, and its miraculous vastness of possibility.
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