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Anthony
Doerr likes to list. It’s a style that becomes quickly apparent in the first
few stories of The Shell Collector and then continues throughout his
collection. Sometimes the lists are funny: “Tequila, reminders of the Marshall
Plan, rudely phrased questions about the queen’s gender and the president’s
bedside fancies” are the “standard provocations” that set two groups of
British and American anglers off on a six month, six continent,
no-expenses-spared fishing contest in “July Fourth.” Other times, the lists
are stunningly beautiful, as when the hunter in “The Hunter’s Wife” looks
out the window on his first planeride to see “rose-lit cumulus, houses and
barns like specks deep in the snowed-in valleys, all the scrolling country below
looking December—brown and black hills streaked with snow, flashes of iced-over
lakes, the long braids of a river gleaming at the bottom of a canyon.”
And at
other times Doerr’s lists are frightening. “Decapitated children, drugged
boys tearing open a pregnant girl, a man hung over a balcony with his severed
hands in his mouth” as well as “rape, murder, an infant kicked against a
wall, a boy with a clutch of dried ears suspended from his neck” are all
images of the Liberian civil war seen by the protagonist of “The Caretaker.”
Listing allows Doerr to convey a large amount of information in a small space or
to describe years in a few instants. It is the device on which many of these
stories hinge: an economy of words used to portray the passing of time. Doerr
can describe intervening years in a sentence or two and then move ahead to focus
on a particularly important moment in paragraphs of vivid detail.
These
stories are certainly about the important moments and days that make up a
person’s life, but they can also encompass decades, as most of the stories in
this collection do. The title story chronicles the life of a blind Canadian man
who has become a collector of shells on the coast of Kenya in his sixties. The
narrator takes two paragraphs to describe the years between the moment he first
touched a shell and his arrival in Lamu. Once again, a list compactly describes
his life: “He returned to Florida, earned a bachelor’s in biology, a Ph.D.
in malacology. He circled the equator; got terribly lost in the streets of Fiji;
got robbed in Guam and again in the Seychelles; discovered new species of
bivalves, a new family of tusk shells, a new Nassarius, a new Fragum.”
The story is not about those years, though; instead, it focuses on the period
after which the shell collector finds a poisonous cone shell that seems capable
of curing life-threatening diseases. Even in the alternative reality of such a
situation, the collector’s academic accomplishments seem far-fetched, and
Doerr’s sliding perspective gives too much visual information to make the
man’s blindness believable anyway. Fortunately, these small weaknesses are the
most glaring in the collection.
Doerr’s
creative handling of the passage of time is just one of the qualities that gives
the stories in The Shell Collector large scope. As the different type of
lists attest, Doerr tackles a wide range of settings in his first collection.
From the shores of Kenya to the wilds of Montana to coastal Maine and Oregon and
suburban Boise, he returns to Africa only after taking the reader on a whirlwind
tour. In each place, the locale and its characters are effortlessly described,
as though from the perspective of a native rather than that of a writer
researching the background for his work. Doerr uses scraps of foreign languages
skillfully as well. When Dr. Kabiru examines the strange woman the shell
collector has found wandering the beach, he announces, “a fever has her” and
it seems a perfect translation. The reader can almost hear the Belorussion
border post police chief, who interrogates the American anglers, describe the
fish they have yet to catch. He taunts, “Oh yes. There are trouts, big trouts
in Biebzra. He said something to his men and they repeated, Big trouts, and
showed the Americans how big with their hands.” The reader cannot help but
feel confident that the writer has given accurate depictions of these settings.
They are all realistic, from Lamu with its Muslim mwadhini who begs the shell
collector to heal his daughter, to an Idaho chain-grocery with its pudgy butcher
named Duck.
Since
he deals with such a disparate set of locations and stories, it is odd that
Doerr seems to recycle imagery throughout the collection. The vivid description
of a “tea-colored river” loses some of its strength because it is repeated
in two different stories. Doerr describes stars and the night-sky gorgeously,
but so often that it seems as though they must have been at the top of some sort
of writer’s checklist. In one story the stars are “knife points,” in
another, “fish hooks.” In one they “riot in the sky,” in another they
“send a frail light onto the sea” and later “blaze in their lightless
tracts.”
Another
of Doerr’s obsessions is intestines, and in particular the words “viscera”
and “eviscerate,” which appear repeatedly throughout the collection.
Doerr
seems to be trying to connect his stories together by using smaller details
rather than larger themes, uniting disparate characters and settings under the
same sky that alters slightly to inform the particular situation. It’s an
interesting goal, but here the device seems more of an accidental weakness than
a consciously used tool, as though the writer reconsiders stars and
disembowelment again and again because he cannot think of anything better to
relate to the setting at hand. These repetitions hinder what would otherwise be
an enormous breadth of material and are disappointing because Doerr’s
underlying themes link his stories together in far more complicated and
interesting ways. Both “The Hunter’s Wife” and “Mkondo,” for example,
are stories about estranged couples who, by the last paragraph, find themselves
reunited and on the brink of reconciliation.
Doerr’s
breadth of setting allows him to illustrate well the difficulties a foreigner
experiences in a foreign land. In “Mkondo,” for example, archaeologist Ward
Beach must acclimate to Tanzania while he is working on a dig. When he brings
Naima home with him to be his wife, she struggles to get used to the life of a
suburban Ohio homemaker in the same way that Joseph Saleeby battles through his
first harsh winter in Oregan. Doroteo San Juan faces a similar culture shock
when her family moves from Ohio to Maine, and “July Fourth” is one long look
at Americans who feel impotent and out of place in Europe. These similarities
tie the stories in Doerr’s collection together more tightly than his repeated
phrases and images or even the constant and more apparent theme of fishing.
Even if its other stories were not breathtaking and beautiful, which they
are, and even if its characters did not introduce the reader to a host of
captivating lives, which they do, The Shell Collector would be valuable
for its longest and most ambitious story, “The Caretaker.” Following Joseph
Saleeby from his young adulthood in Liberia through the horrific experiences of
his war-torn nation to his arrival as a political refugee in Oregon, it
illustrates both the scope of which Doerr is capable and the compassion and
understanding which with he creates his characters. Josephy Saleeby is so
believable—his story rings so natural, so true—it seems impossible that a
white American could have written his life. The most moving passages in the
story describe Joseph burying the hearts of five beached whales in the hillside
above the shore. Because he has been unable to lay to rest any of the nightmares
he witnessed in Liberia, this is a thrilling depiction of psychological
self-preservation that becomes complete when Joseph eats a melon grown from the
fertilized soil. For a 28-year-old writer to attempt a story with the
geographical and cultural scope of “The Caretaker” requires enormous mettle;
the story is indisputably a daring piece of work. Saleeby’s story is a
triumph; and for that, we can and must forgive Anthony Doerr his small faults.
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